Thank you for your feedback. I have written the Abstract and Motivation.

If my English is poor please let me know. Also let me know any other comments or criticism you may have.

Thank you,
Jona

2015-02-21 22:34 GMT+09:00 Pavol Rusnak <stick@gk2.sk>:
On 21/02/15 14:20, 木ノ下じょな wrote:
> I have put together a proposal for a new generation methodology of HD
> wallets.

Your proposal is missing Abstract and Motivation sections. Abstract
tells us WHAT are trying to achieve, Motivation tells WHY. It's not
worth to dig into technical details of your implementation until these
two questions are answered.

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Best Regards / S pozdravom,

Pavol Rusnak <stick@gk2.sk>



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